Talk:Moor Street/@comment-4356721-20110901211936/@comment-1854594-20110902195722

I thought a short story would keep people's attention better, because it wouldn't be as much to read. The plot is going to thicken alot more starting Pmaws and up. I'm making the quotes, alot of the plot is going to be delivered by the character's quotes, alot of hints and such to "the lie" but I'm guessing even if I do that no one's going to read the quotes anyway. I'm working hard on the character design to make funny and interesting characters.

What do you mean predictable names? Usopire? Sanron? Pmaws? The Lie? I made the names specifically to NOT be predictable. The Lie is supposed to be the big reveal about what the lie was and the climax.