Talk:Black Heart/@comment-2098737-20130222222519

It's great, I have to say, but it's very blocky and kind of thrown together. I'd suggest you seperate the paragraphs a bit more.

Second, I saw a couple errors. First, Joey is an American and Australian name, no German would name their kid Joey. And the other problem is, the M1911 is also an American manufactured weapon during World War 2, how did they get their hands on one?